Visitor: Syd's Song
flower-bubble ash-
tray gather secrets
messages from burning visions
to come
deciphering night’s
long, shotgun style, box-tunnel
starting here
at my table
peering out over
wandering jews . . . wandering
searching for the moon: light-junkies
waiting.........for............ the........... Sun
and black-eyed suzies with dried, curled
yellow petals stiff with their lifelessness
and, at the other end of this box-shaped
vortex, traveling out my windows: turquoise
jewel of infinity gleams
redirecting
refracting light
from a thousand points
while silence awaits . . . any sound
but not one echoes
throughout this chamber
no whipping white cloths
to cover the doorways to hide
what lies beyond each threshold
While the hum of a nearby machine
and the ticking of a clock
were the only indicators
that somewhere
at some point
there must have been- life.
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I debated with myself over the addition to the title. It was my first intention to dedicate to the man, but I didn't necessarily write it with him in mind, but only with his state of mind.
tray gather secrets
messages from burning visions
to come
deciphering night’s
long, shotgun style, box-tunnel
starting here
at my table
peering out over
wandering jews . . . wandering
searching for the moon: light-junkies
waiting.........for............ the........... Sun
and black-eyed suzies with dried, curled
yellow petals stiff with their lifelessness
and, at the other end of this box-shaped
vortex, traveling out my windows: turquoise
jewel of infinity gleams
redirecting
refracting light
from a thousand points
while silence awaits . . . any sound
but not one echoes
throughout this chamber
no whipping white cloths
to cover the doorways to hide
what lies beyond each threshold
While the hum of a nearby machine
and the ticking of a clock
were the only indicators
that somewhere
at some point
there must have been- life.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I debated with myself over the addition to the title. It was my first intention to dedicate to the man, but I didn't necessarily write it with him in mind, but only with his state of mind.
2 Comments:
I like the flow of this, so unpredictable and non trite.
It’s like an odd arrangement that makes perfect sense. I can hear things like it in my head when I let myself go…just go.
I really like this piece...it speaks to me. I would go into great detail why but I have a tendency to babble, so I'll spare you.
I thank you madam. But spare me not. Climb that tower of babble on...anytime.
Thankx for reading AND commenting.
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