Stairway
"Yes There are Two Paths You Can Go By
But In The Long Run
There’s Still Time To Change The Road You're On . . . .
. . . And It makes me wonder
Your Head Is Humming And It Won't Go ~ In Case You Don’t Know
The Piper’s Calling You To Join Him"
~ Led Zeppelin
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winter-rain taps so
loudly. faint palpitations:
vibrate into sound.
posted by Sir James Eric Watkins at 3:12 PM
9 Comments:
I love Zeppelin. I catch my son listening to them all of the time. He gets into alot of our old CD's. My son says all the good music and cool cars are from the 70's.
All of this winter rain were having, in my case, freezing rain, sleet, and snow has us hold up in houses, listening to music.
...So, you come from a a crazy hippie/gansters/bikers, and yes junkies family as well. I relate to that crazy side of you.
I also relate because you are an old soul, James.
Becky
I am.
I've been around for so long. And still, there is so much more to do.
thankx becky boo.
i like that you're doing haiku, check syllable count in line two, sorry! add a word before palpitations - 'faint'
right. right.
thank you sir.
faint. fitting. for sure.
But let's see how it looks "on paper."
I can see the drops
flying apart as they tap
so loudly
I can see em in my mind's eye.
I may have to paint it.
Hey James, are you related to us?
xx, Lori
I don't Know.
Am I?
Tha'd be a twist though. huh?
Enjoyed the two haiku pieces (this one and the previous, "Drop by Drop"). Especially since, in my case, I'm usually awake the whole night, and the rain I simply adore. ^_^ Cheers.
I simply adore it too.
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